Hold My Hand
In the midst of this sorrow
Let’s find some peace.
Don’t see only this hateful world.
Please, in this grief,
Find a way to love.
In this pain,
Find some way to dance.
Hold my hand
I’ll dance with you
In the dust and ashes.
My feet don’t move
Will you show me the steps
To the song inside your head?
The one I used to know.
Don’t let them make us
Become like them,
Spiteful and looking for revenge.
Let’s hope for something better
Something eternal with love.
Keeps on leaving
You and me.
Why waste it
With consuming things?
Author Bio: Havilah is a poetry and speculative fiction writer from the hills of East Tennessee. Besides writing she likes art, mountains, and anything to do with Meyer-Briggs personality types.
The final battle is approaching…
Lennox continues to fight against the Regime and Ahab, battling her own emotions as well as she gets over the loss of her best friend. Times are changing, and she soon learns that. Now working as a combat medic, she works to find survivors in what used to be the beautiful, free land of America. Now all she can see is blood, death, and destruction. Not only do they have to face Ahab and the Regime, but the Regime is now working on altering humans and animals alike, enhancing them and changing their DNA and faith in God isn’t proving to be enough.
Will the Sparrows succeed?
Or will they be lost in the tide of war-
Mandy Fender has, again, done an outstanding job. The themes and the characters are relatable and the book proposes the question we all ask ourselves- through it all, will we prevail?
Lovers of the Hunger Games, Legend and Maze Runner series will devour this epic finale to an equally epic series. If you are a teen striving to seek and serve God in all you do and say, this novel is for you. From the beginning to the beautiful, artistic ending, Lennox remains strong in her beliefs and strives to please her Master.
Mandy Fender artistically crafts words to fit onto the clean white pages like a master. This award-winning author shapes this novel together in a way that promises to make you stay up until the morning light.
Through all of the novel, she weaves beautiful messages, shows us that the future isn’t that bleak and reminds us that, if we have Christ, we are, indeed, a Conqueror.
School is starting on Monday. Yikes! Kinda freaking out, but I know that I’ll be okay! Because of that fact, however, I am pushing back my writing on here to just once a month. I apologize for any inconvenience!
I’ve been so busy, Saturday snuck up on me without me noticing. So I decided to share a prompt that one of my lovely author friends came up with.
What can you do? How can you twist it? What’s going on? Post your answer in the comments below!!
“Okay, so I know we agreed on the plan, but I was thinking maybe I should sneak in by myself and-“
“If you finish that sentence, I am going to disown you.”
“We’re not even related.”
“I don’t care. I will find a way.”
Okay, there’s a big issue going on right now. Basically, it’s all about ‘is my novel unique enough?’ and then people stop writing their novels because they are worried that it isn’t. Let me tell you this- I’ve stopped more than one novel because I was afraid I was copying.
And maybe I was, I don’t know.
The thing is, there is no new idea in this world by now. Want to write a story about a rebellion? It’s been done. Want to write a story about a space ship? Done. Over and over and over again. But the thing is… each of those novels were successful. Why? Because each of them had an element that made them special and unique.
Here are some simple tips to making sure your novel is unique.
1. Change the time-period.
If you want to write a book about aliens invading the world, well, go for it. But, I mean, Independence Day? So change the time period. Make it Medieval. Train a group of knights to fight against the strange ships that come from the sky.
2. Change your tense/pov
People often say that Divergent is too much like Hunger Games. Honestly, other than the fact that it is in a futuristic world and people don’t get to choose what they do… I don’t see it. If Veronica Roth had made it third person, past tense, I doubt anyone would have judged her. So change the POV and you’ll have an entirely different perspective.
3. Change the scenery
If the book/movie you are afraid that you are copying is set in Iceland… make your book in a tropical paradise. If you do this, most people won’t even think of comparing.
4. Give your character a darker twist to avoid cliche
Okay, we’ve all heard the story of the knight rescuing the princess from the dragon. Some people like to flip it on their head and say that the dragon was rescuing the princess from the knight. But what if you gave it an even darker twist? Say that the knight was rescuing the dragon from the bloodthirsty princess? Even if your story is so cliché, all you have to do is give it a sinister and darker twist. People won’t even notice the original then.
What are your success stories for making your novel unique? Share in the comments below!
So… I realized today as I was typing that I missed my post yesterday. Whoops. I’ve been super busy and sick this week so… yeah, I have no excuse. Anyways, here is a book review for a new book from a author friend of mine, Paul Willis!
Jack has never had a simple day in his life. Growing up in futuristic-America where Christianity is not an option, he has always had to conceal his secret. Through the years of his life the persecution of the forbidden Christians has become quite deadly. When his sister is drafted into the army, Jack accidentally does something so reckless it puts his entire family in danger. Thankfully he has connections- and the people who will escort his family to Mexico are offering Jack something much bigger than freedom. They’re offering him a chance to fight for it.
This book is filled with non-stop, fast-paced action that will cause readers to grip the edge of their seats, or should I say books? Anyone who is looking for a wild, Christian dystopian are encouraged to check this out. The moral messages are strong, the characters are quite relatable, and Crossroads covers the question that we always ask.
How far are we willing to go?
Overall I give this book a rating of four out of five stars. The only reason I am not allowing five stars is because there were some points I found quite confusing and unable to understand. Other than that this was a fantastic read and I recommend it to anyone and everyone. Go buy it. You won’t regret it!
Specific age range: 16+ for violence, gore, and some disturbing images.
Order Paul’s Book here!!!
I know this is not your usual post you expect from me. Why am I using my Saturday to tell you some wonderful news?
Well I already posted my ‘thoughts’ for the week- and did that early. “How unprofessional!” You must be thinking.
Maybe it is, I don’t know.
But I wanted to fully dedicate this page to sharing with you, my lovely followers, news that will forever alter my life. So… here we go. (Let’s start with the least exciting first, shall we?)
- I’ve opened up a new Instagram account!
Yes, that’s right. It’s a new account solely dedicated to my writing. So if you’re interested in seeing what happens on the inside of a Writer’s life (quotes, thoughts… basically just the journey to publishing my first book) then scoot on over and follow me at the_queen_of_wonders ! (Currently my account is private so you’ll have to request me.)
And now for the exciting part!!!!
- Your old blogger has been asked to be part of TCB writing staff- and I said yes!!!
You’ve got it. Because of this here blog and my writings on the Rebelution, they wrote me and asked for me to be one of their twelve! So excited about that bit.
This means that I will be writing for them once a month- and will be featured on the Meet the Authors page along with the link to this here blog. 😉
Currently I am working on a series titled “Drop the Mike.” The first article will be released sometime in July.
So… scurry on over to the link below and subscribe to TCB to never miss a post!
Forever I remain,
Your sister in Christ